Hello everyone,
I think blogging should be part of our #Kean University Marketing Course because it brings a new way for classmates to interact out of the classroom and because blogging is becoming more popular among entertainment companies including racetracks.
Businesses seem to be doing very well as far as living up to the expectations for social media in 2010. I see many commercials ranging from video game products to beer products that have symbols to show they are on facebook and twitter.
I've improved the entry from last week by giving it a title that will grab the attention of a person. I named this entry "Remix" because it is the remix to the first first blog.
If I had the writing principles last week, I would have made my entry more concise, precise and an easier read.
Thomas Cassidy
Thomas,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your blog posting. It's thoughtful, pithy and grammatically correct, which is so important for good solid media.
With whom is blogging becoming popular? And what companies or organizations are using social media well. Whose Twitter and Facebook symbols stand out to you?
Two comments:
1. Headline: The best blog posts have catching headlines. They should be accurate and specific, but catching to the reader.
2. Paragraphs: Should be short. One thought per paragraph and no more than 2 sentences. It's easier to read.
Well done.
Perri